1. In a nutshell
❌ In a nutshell, equity in health care is the key to a truly advanced society.
✅ In conclusion, equity in health care is the key to a truly advanced society.
2. A couple of
❌ A couple of scientists have succeeded in replicating the vaccine.
✅ Several scientists have succeeded in replicating the vaccine.
3. Kids
❌ Kids who have been allowed to make their own choices will eventually develop a keen sense of responsibility.
✅ Children who have been allowed to make their own choices will eventually develop a keen sense of responsibility.
4. You
- You can participate in the experiment.
✅ One can participate in the experiment.
5. At the end of the day
❌ At the end of the day, although newspapers remain popular today, they will gradually be replaced by the desire to read the news through electronic sources.
✅ In conclusion, although newspapers remain popular today, they will gradually be replaced by the desire to read the news through electronic sources.
6. Point out
❌ Studies have pointed out that most young children who commit crimes have been abused in some way by their parents.
✅ Studies have indicated that most young children who commit crimes have been abused in some way by their parents.
7. Get
❌ The majority of students who have gotten the scholarship are from Asia.
✅ The majority of students who have received the scholarship are from Asia.
8. Give
❌ The study gives an overview of the history of mankind.
✅ The study presents an overview of the history of mankind.
9. Find out
- Archaeologists have found out the footprints of a Neanderthal in Europe.
✅ Archaeologists have discovered the footprints of a Neanderthal in Europe.
10. Think about
❌ The government should think about a more efficient and equitable way to raise taxes.
✅ The government should consider a more efficient and equitable way to raise taxes.
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